Read critical reviews for The Survivor's Very Short Story, by Ilhamghanim Issa

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Writer Ilhamghanim Issa

Crowds rush to the wire and youth ..

 

A buzzing bullets dispel the impulses,

 

The squawks of a tank of .. and howling wolves scatter screams.

 

Bereaved voices grow louder ..

 

Everyone on the ground is lying on top of the magnifications ... their last breath is taken by a bulldozer.

 

The idol of freedom is falling ..

 

As his skinny body penetrated a treacherous bullet ..

 

And limp to the sky ..

 

Frequency of scattered corpses:

 

Congratulations .. the highest paradise ..

 

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Reading: Writer, storyteller and critic, Mr. Hamad Haji / Tunisia

 

This thief / short story looked very short .. HD .. how?

 

With technical characteristics of the short text par excellence .. How?

 

In addition to its intense, concentrated economic development of the letter, the wording and the phrase ... and its accurate and purposeful suggestion for every pronounced ..

And the amazement of its dazzling lock.

 

And the poise of her antidote is based on miraculous luxury (How can bodies speak and how ?!).

 

The story and fiction had a focal point for the narration ... How ?!

 

The writer has established the path of the narration and its events based on the scene and looking from different angles.

 

As a dialogue and polyphony of the Russian school, as the overlapping of literary races and literary genres represents tributaries of multiple voices.

 

You hear the sound of bullets .. The voice of the youth .. The whining of the bereaved .. The buzzing of the tanks .. Multiple to compose a cinematic scene .. The narrator tells him holding a camera and through a view and an angle of view ..

 

Any beauty, and any movement seized by the camera, tends her to the outside and turns her away.

 

It's a very nice short story ..

 

For readers to pay attention to it .. This is the very short story that kidnapped the scene, moved it and looked at it from the angle of dialogue between its people.

And now it is left for the reader to complete the scene

 

How did you start ..?

 

Where have those events become?

 

What are the people involved and what do they do?

 

How formulated the text familiar in unfamiliar?

 

Where does the reader perceive his emotions?

 

Did the reader find himself or others?

 

This is the very short storytelling mission ..

 

To ask the question a glance and an abduction .. And leave the answer to the reader to establish another more exciting question ..

 

And broken his long awaits ..

 

Fine text for me .. Really creative: